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Artist's Comments~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ AUGH WHY DID THIS TURN OUT SO SMALL!? I think its because I inked it on my fatass monitor back home which makes everything look huger.... unless this one makes things look smaller... FECK. Conundrum. Commission for =Kins-Wolf of this anthro fursona Kins! A very interesting design which I think I coulda pulled off better in less dark lighting and BIGGER SNARFWKHGEMHEJGU<I I hope you like it anyway kins! This isn't ridiculously dark on everyones monitors is it? CommentsIt is kind of dark with the smaller image.
But once you get a larger look, it looks great the way it is. I like the area of it all and the position of Kins -- My life held together with ~Music~Art~Animals~ =WolvenYoukai Art and Main Account *WYArts Photography Account Pierce my flesh with metal and ink.... |
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As well as the mix-up of making the background a bit more or less detailed than the original subject. To me, this makes the anthro/were standout more and leads the focus to the actual character instead of the background. (granted be, the background is very well done too!)
However, there are also a few things that made me tilt my head a bit. The main thing that looks a bit 'off' is the angle of the head and the way it contrasts to the connection with the torso. Though it may be possible to turn your head that far as an anthro (as animals are naturally more flexible than a human) the way the bend and turn is portrayed here is a bit askew. If I were to suggest a way to help this I would say making a 'spine line'
If you already use a guideline for a sketch, you may know what I'm talking about. Using the spine line will help anchor where the neck can bend, and where it will connect with the torso, making it a bit less easy to make the mistake of placing the head too far to the left, or too far to the right when making a head turn. Also, another good way is looking to a mirror and watching how your neck turns and bends in the same pose. It helps
As for the rest of the picture, it's very, very good, and like I said, the only thing that caught my eye as far as 'off' was the neck and torso.
Also, if the background and subject are to be molded into the same picture, since the there is a moon in the background, maybe a bit of brighter shine on the fur facing the moon would be a good way to show the blending of main subject and background.
The vision and beauty of this picture really makes it stand out, and I really like this piece. You're very, very talented with your technique, and I have been watching you for a while now, and your works never seem to be boring. This is another beautiful piece that should be marveled and cherished by those who look at it
I hope my critique was understandable, and not too vague or out of proof. I'm still a bit new at this, so please, excuse if I make any mistakes
however i think that you should be carewfull with purporcions (or whatever you write that ) and also anatomy , the way we are seeing the character is also important, the way you drew his neck and his torso isnt very correct , if this were to happen with a 'real ' werewolf lets say, he would be making a very big effort to place his neck like that while his torso is standing like that
a sides from such this si a very pretty piece and i like how you coloured it a lot , i also like his more flected leg and paw >_< it looks so niceeee
i dont know if this can be considered a critique but well yeah
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